I really enjoy your dialogue. It sucks you in, makes it feel real. I always enjoy reading things which make me actively try to work out if a character is to be trusted or not, where the emotions aren't simply spoon-fed to you.
This really gets the gears turning though, which I suppose is probably why you wrote it. It encapsulates a reality beneath the surface that most of us don't and/or aren't willing to admit exists. Good work
I really enjoy your dialogue. It sucks you in, makes it feel real. I always enjoy reading things which make me actively try to work out if a character is to be trusted or not, where the emotions aren't simply spoon-fed to you.
This really gets the gears turning though, which I suppose is probably why you wrote it. It encapsulates a reality beneath the surface that most of us don't and/or aren't willing to admit exists. Good work